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OOC: I set up the topic, so no worries you don't have to do it. You can choose whether I play your Shadow or you do, it's fine if you want to play or if you want me to play, I don't have no problem with either. ^^ Also did I mention, you remind me a lot of Chie from Persona 4. If you've ever heard of or played the game before you'll know who I'm talking about. I partially got this idea from there anyway. Though I adapted it to its own setting with my mind. But, yeah have fun, sorry for the length of this message.
Often times, the evidence of a troubled mind is in the inability to function properly throughout everyday life. The individuals suffering would slowly atrophy because their own souls are battling them and winning. They are defeating their minds, overpowering them quite easily and snapping them as if they were twigs. Well, you must have the strength to face others in life; Quintessentially, everyone must learn this lesson. But, what some do not know is that there is a time when one will have to face oneself and that takes even more courage....
Everyone has things they hide. Everyone has hidden thoughts and feelings. Everyone has secrets. Part of what makes life and our interaction with one another as human beings so interesting is the urge, the yearning, the want, the need to know what the other is thinking. What the other is feeling; and more importantly, what the other is hiding. We as human beings always yearn for the truth, be it hidden or not, we always wish to know something, a secret, a knowledge, a thing that is not something personal to us. We love to know gossip for whenever a conversation flares out. But, mostly, it is the suppression of the being with a secret that keeps us from ever being COMPLETELY honest with each other. What if that were to change?
"Hey Mero, mind if I ask why we're training here anyway? I mean I thought the other place was good enough but you suggested we come here, any particular reason?"
It looked to be a completely empty field with tall grass swaying in the gentle winds that blew by. It was quite calm and relaxing. No life, nothing was in the area; and it seemed there never would be anything here. It was like this were a place, a secret place, on Earth that no one knew about, but, then again, things on Earth were not like this. We had gone through the portal once more to this alternate dimension, one that seemed to have a peaceful setting.
OOC: I set up the topic, so no worries you don't have to do it. You can choose whether I play your Shadow or you do, it's fine if you want to play or if you want me to play, I don't have no problem with either. ^^ Also did I mention, you remind me a lot of Chie from Persona 4. If you've ever heard of or played the game before you'll know who I'm talking about. I partially got this idea from there anyway. Though I adapted it to its own setting with my mind. But, yeah have fun, sorry for the length of this message.
Often times, the evidence of a troubled mind is in the inability to function properly throughout everyday life. The individuals suffering would slowly atrophy because their own souls are battling them and winning. They are defeating their minds, overpowering them quite easily and snapping them as if they were twigs. Well, you must have the strength to face others in life; Quintessentially, everyone must learn this lesson. But, what some do not know is that there is a time when one will have to face oneself and that takes even more courage....
Everyone has things they hide. Everyone has hidden thoughts and feelings. Everyone has secrets. Part of what makes life and our interaction with one another as human beings so interesting is the urge, the yearning, the want, the need to know what the other is thinking. What the other is feeling; and more importantly, what the other is hiding. We as human beings always yearn for the truth, be it hidden or not, we always wish to know something, a secret, a knowledge, a thing that is not something personal to us. We love to know gossip for whenever a conversation flares out. But, mostly, it is the suppression of the being with a secret that keeps us from ever being COMPLETELY honest with each other. What if that were to change?
"Hey Mero, mind if I ask why we're training here anyway? I mean I thought the other place was good enough but you suggested we come here, any particular reason?"
It looked to be a completely empty field with tall grass swaying in the gentle winds that blew by. It was quite calm and relaxing. No life, nothing was in the area; and it seemed there never would be anything here. It was like this were a place, a secret place, on Earth that no one knew about, but, then again, things on Earth were not like this. We had gone through the portal once more to this alternate dimension, one that seemed to have a peaceful setting.
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I rested my cheek on my fist and narrowed my eyes at her. "Ha- ha..But I believe you know the answer to that one". I knew she was joking somewhat and it didn't matter. "Although going around the kingdom, I had noticed some of its very attractive residence".
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"Well, not that I usually talk like this, but who have you taken interest with?"
I looked at her for a second and then continued drawing. It felt good to just sit and talk with my best friend for once.
I looked at her for a second and then continued drawing. It felt good to just sit and talk with my best friend for once.
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I shrugged and sighed. "Sadly I never got any names. But if I see them around I'll point them out to you".
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"Maybe I know them, and maybe I can help you out."
I winked and laughed, knowing that teasing her was way too easy. Then again I wasn't really getting any sort of reaction out of her. I really needed to work on my skills.
I winked and laughed, knowing that teasing her was way too easy. Then again I wasn't really getting any sort of reaction out of her. I really needed to work on my skills.
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I smirked at her attempts to tease me. She did put in a good effort and it was working, but only slightly. "Maybe you can, but you know me. Romance isn't on my list of things to do", I drawled.
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I smirked in that way that told you I was satisfied. Sure, I needed to work on my skills more but it was working already. Oh yeah! I just hoped she didn't get any ideas back. She was the queen of teasing and get her started, well, you'd be on the floor, fainted from the amount of blood rushing to your cheeks before the night was through.
"Right, right. I gotcha. But everyone's gotta fall in love with someone, sometime don't they? You can't just remain The Solo Solider forever. After all, that's no fun."
I smiled and winked, still drawing up the other plans.
"Right, right. I gotcha. But everyone's gotta fall in love with someone, sometime don't they? You can't just remain The Solo Solider forever. After all, that's no fun."
I smiled and winked, still drawing up the other plans.
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I shrugged. "If life ever becomes boring for me in that aspect, I'll just galavant around having flings and such" I laughed.
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"Well, alright. I guess that's all you can do is go the way life takes you."
I stopped drawing the plans of the new and better built kingdom for a moment and took a small break, shaking my hand out. It was hurting from all the tentative work I was doing. I sat back and folded my arms behind my head, watching Mero.
I stopped drawing the plans of the new and better built kingdom for a moment and took a small break, shaking my hand out. It was hurting from all the tentative work I was doing. I sat back and folded my arms behind my head, watching Mero.
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"I guess so" I smirked. "Hand hurt?" I asked amused.
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"It's just a little tired."
I nodded whilst still shaking my hand. Now I was looking at the workers, scanning the jobs they were doing. However, one particular worker caught my eye.
OOC: Well something has to happen right?
I nodded whilst still shaking my hand. Now I was looking at the workers, scanning the jobs they were doing. However, one particular worker caught my eye.
OOC: Well something has to happen right?
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OCC: I guess?
I continued to as I closed my eyes and got comfortable. "Try yelling, that might wake it up" I joked in a lazy tone.
I continued to as I closed my eyes and got comfortable. "Try yelling, that might wake it up" I joked in a lazy tone.
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OOC: Yeah, I mean I just had an idea for something but I don't know. I just wanna make something else happen right now since it seems all we're doing is talking.
I simply ignored Mero's comment and continued to focus on this one female worker.
I simply ignored Mero's comment and continued to focus on this one female worker.
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OOC: Kay xD
I opened my eyes and followed her gaze. "Ah, got you sighs on that girly? Why don't you go talk to her?"
I opened my eyes and followed her gaze. "Ah, got you sighs on that girly? Why don't you go talk to her?"
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"Huh? Oh, well, I mean, she's cute and all but I'm sure she's busy at work. And well, I don't know."
I just continued to look. At one point she caught my gaze, smiled and waved to me, she was friendly. I smiled and waved back and then she went back to work.
I just continued to look. At one point she caught my gaze, smiled and waved to me, she was friendly. I smiled and waved back and then she went back to work.
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I rolled my eyes at her, "Your the Prince for pete sakes. WHo cars if she's working I'm sure she'll stop for you" .
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"You really think so?"
I dared to look away and at Mero.
I dared to look away and at Mero.
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"Yes, now go before I start yelling at her and embarrassing her".
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"Alright, alright, sheesh."
Carefully I wheeled myself over to her to talk.
Carefully I wheeled myself over to her to talk.
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I turned my chair around so I could watched. I may have looked like a dumb ass but I didn't care. Some man walked by with a cold drink and I snatched it form his hands and drank it as I waited for any interactions.
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SEVERAL MONTHS LATER....
I was healing from my wounds quite nicely. I was now able to walk, still not able to fight under any circumstance. Actually, it was quite strenuous to even attempt running. I guess that's what happens when you bust yourself trying defend your home. ^^'' The girl worker had come back even though they took off for the month to get more materials to build the last piece of the palace left to build. I smiled it was turning out even better than before. And I was happy that I'd brought it to life. The female worker saw me sitting there, writing something, as did Mero whom was doing whatever else she was doing.
"So whatcha writin' there Prince? You seem like your busy at work."
I smiled.
"Just a story I felt would be really cool. I started writing it just a few days ago but I haven't been on top of my work lately since I'm kinda..."
I dropped my pen and covered my nose as I sneezed, then wiped it with the tissue laying on the table I was sitting at.
"Sick?" She giggled.
"Yeah but writing this is fun so I'm going to keep going. Besides it's good for me. But, I don't remember your name, after all this time I don't think you've ever introduced yourself to me."
"My name's Blake. It's nice to meet you, of course I know who you are."
"Yeah, but to make this introduction less awkward. My name's Utena Tenjou. Pleasure. I'd shake your hand but I don't want to make you sick."
I rubbed the back of my head. The girl smiled and giggled, then pulling out a cigarette from the pack in her back pocket. She seemed to be searching for some source to light it since she'd lost her lighter.
"Damnit. I lost my lighter. Utena, you think you could use that wonderful magical power of yours and light this for me?"
"Sure."
I summoned a small flame to my finger, but it turned white when it hit the tip of my finger. I was always strange when using fire. Somehow it always turned to a white color, that or a cyan blue. I supposed it was just the type of magic I possessed. The small flame hit the end of her cigarette and she began to smoke it in a happy delight. But then I sneezed and the cigarette, died completely, as if it had never been lit, when it was at a sure enough distance away from me. I sneezed again and it went back to being lit as it was already. I sniffed and tried to grab hold of my pen to write more to this manuscript I had present. I'd hoped no one noticed the cigarette thing happen just now.
"Boy, you're pretty sick. You have Otoha check that for ya? I mean it'd make sense. Especially if you're sneezing this much and this hard. Gotta take some medicine, dude."
She blew out another puff of smoke, away from me of course, who sniffed and nodded in agreement. I should do all of that. I had talked to Otoha about it but I hadn't been drinking tea or anything lately, just sorta taking medicine when necessary. It was working, but slowly.
"Anyway, I need to get back to this. This is probably the best thing I've ever come up with. I'm not going to let a little cold get in my way. This story is too important to me. It's not gonna stop my pen, no siree."
I went back to writing on the paper, scheming up some things to happen next within the plot. Blake just smoked more to her cigarette standing within the room with Mero and I.
I was healing from my wounds quite nicely. I was now able to walk, still not able to fight under any circumstance. Actually, it was quite strenuous to even attempt running. I guess that's what happens when you bust yourself trying defend your home. ^^'' The girl worker had come back even though they took off for the month to get more materials to build the last piece of the palace left to build. I smiled it was turning out even better than before. And I was happy that I'd brought it to life. The female worker saw me sitting there, writing something, as did Mero whom was doing whatever else she was doing.
"So whatcha writin' there Prince? You seem like your busy at work."
I smiled.
"Just a story I felt would be really cool. I started writing it just a few days ago but I haven't been on top of my work lately since I'm kinda..."
I dropped my pen and covered my nose as I sneezed, then wiped it with the tissue laying on the table I was sitting at.
"Sick?" She giggled.
"Yeah but writing this is fun so I'm going to keep going. Besides it's good for me. But, I don't remember your name, after all this time I don't think you've ever introduced yourself to me."
"My name's Blake. It's nice to meet you, of course I know who you are."
"Yeah, but to make this introduction less awkward. My name's Utena Tenjou. Pleasure. I'd shake your hand but I don't want to make you sick."
I rubbed the back of my head. The girl smiled and giggled, then pulling out a cigarette from the pack in her back pocket. She seemed to be searching for some source to light it since she'd lost her lighter.
"Damnit. I lost my lighter. Utena, you think you could use that wonderful magical power of yours and light this for me?"
"Sure."
I summoned a small flame to my finger, but it turned white when it hit the tip of my finger. I was always strange when using fire. Somehow it always turned to a white color, that or a cyan blue. I supposed it was just the type of magic I possessed. The small flame hit the end of her cigarette and she began to smoke it in a happy delight. But then I sneezed and the cigarette, died completely, as if it had never been lit, when it was at a sure enough distance away from me. I sneezed again and it went back to being lit as it was already. I sniffed and tried to grab hold of my pen to write more to this manuscript I had present. I'd hoped no one noticed the cigarette thing happen just now.
"Boy, you're pretty sick. You have Otoha check that for ya? I mean it'd make sense. Especially if you're sneezing this much and this hard. Gotta take some medicine, dude."
She blew out another puff of smoke, away from me of course, who sniffed and nodded in agreement. I should do all of that. I had talked to Otoha about it but I hadn't been drinking tea or anything lately, just sorta taking medicine when necessary. It was working, but slowly.
"Anyway, I need to get back to this. This is probably the best thing I've ever come up with. I'm not going to let a little cold get in my way. This story is too important to me. It's not gonna stop my pen, no siree."
I went back to writing on the paper, scheming up some things to happen next within the plot. Blake just smoked more to her cigarette standing within the room with Mero and I.
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I sighed and called for Otoha. I asked her to fetch some food and drink for Utena because she hunt been eating lately. I sat down and watched Utena write and smirked at her and Blakes exchange. They would be cute together... that is if they ever got together.
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"What's-a-matter? Can't control your powers there, witchy?"
Blake laughed and joked about my inability to hold control over my powers. I heard her, since she was standing right there, but I paid no mind to it. Instead I just happily sat there and wrote more to my story. I was at peace with writing.
"Alright, I think I'm almost done with this story. I just finished chapter 10. Alright, onto 11."
"Since when did you become the little author? I don't ever remembering you like to write so much. What? Has the hammer of creativity knocked you silly in the head or somethin'?"
She took another puff of smoke and then laughed as she released it, smiling. She said things that were amusing, I'd admit. Once more I continued to write but this time, I answered.
"Well, what else can you do when you're injured and sick?"
I smiled softly and my pen kept going as if my hand were under some spell that wouldn't allow it to stop. I was on fire with writing this story! Blake shrugged and took another puff of her cigarette whilst Otoha got some food and drink, thanks to Mero's call.
"So you gonna share with us any time soon what this story's about, princey?"
Blake laughed, she was teasing me. I tried not to react without however displeased I was she was making fun of my title. I didn't dare answer and kept writing. She and I may have become okay friends, but she was definitely more of a nuisance than anything...
Blake laughed and joked about my inability to hold control over my powers. I heard her, since she was standing right there, but I paid no mind to it. Instead I just happily sat there and wrote more to my story. I was at peace with writing.
"Alright, I think I'm almost done with this story. I just finished chapter 10. Alright, onto 11."
"Since when did you become the little author? I don't ever remembering you like to write so much. What? Has the hammer of creativity knocked you silly in the head or somethin'?"
She took another puff of smoke and then laughed as she released it, smiling. She said things that were amusing, I'd admit. Once more I continued to write but this time, I answered.
"Well, what else can you do when you're injured and sick?"
I smiled softly and my pen kept going as if my hand were under some spell that wouldn't allow it to stop. I was on fire with writing this story! Blake shrugged and took another puff of her cigarette whilst Otoha got some food and drink, thanks to Mero's call.
"So you gonna share with us any time soon what this story's about, princey?"
Blake laughed, she was teasing me. I tried not to react without however displeased I was she was making fun of my title. I didn't dare answer and kept writing. She and I may have become okay friends, but she was definitely more of a nuisance than anything...
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I leaned in and propped my chin up on the palm of my hand. "I'm curious as to what you are writing about as well".
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"Alright fine then, pen, I trust you know what to do."
I smiled and lt go of it, having it write the story on its own without my hand's guidance. It was working well, good, so no bugs with that spell. It was connected to my mind and what it wished to write so it knew exactly what it was doing. I faced the both of them by turning around as much as I could without having to get up and change my position. I may have been able to walk, but with crutches.
"Well the story is really cool. It's about this girl. She was born blind and well, she's always missed out on the fruits of being able to see in life. She's always been lonely. Her dad's a workaholic and never pays attention to her. She has no friends because she's always within her father's corporate doors. She does get to go out sometimes but rarely ever. She's always been picked on for being the rich kid in school, when she goes. For those who know about her impairment they tease her for that. One day she runs away from home. She swears she'll grow up to be the strongest and best warrior that ever lived, even without her sight. It's then that on one of her journeys she meets a young wizard. A boy with incredible power and no way to control it. He must learn to work together with her because in the end there is an evildoer plotting the destruction of the main character. Why? Because even though she's blind, the blood within her is a rare and special gift. Just the kind of gift that could be used in various demonic ways. The wizard and the girl must stop the evildoer at all costs. They end up becoming best friends along their journeys. However, in the end, they get into this big battle with this evildoer, she's charged with super power by the gems she wears all around her. They give her her incredible strength. The wizard and the girl take her on, and the boy ends up dying from the battle. It's a little too much for him to handle. But he's weakened her enough so that the girl takes matters into her own hands and slays the evildoer and sets free all of her test subjects that never had a chance at life. I'm wondering if I should have a twist at the end that makes it so the wizard boy comes back and cures her blindness, or leave it as is."
I explained my story to them.
"Haha! Wow, sounds like a sob story. Only you'd come up with that princey!"
She took another puff of her cigarette.
"So that's the whole plot huh? Well, I sure hope that there's something else in there you could make it a little more exciting. I mean, gee, all of that is way too cliche. The only part that caught my interest was the test subjects you said. What kind of test subjects we talkin' and what are they capable of?"
"That's because you're a science freak and that's the only thing that would interest you in this epic tale. I don't think it's all that boring. I think it's good for someone whom isn't a writer."
"Relax prince, you don't have to get all touchy about it. Man, you claim you're anything but female, feminine, and here you are getting all defensive. Quit your whining, I never said the story was bad. Just that it'd bore me some. This isn't my type of story y'know?"
"Well, I think I'm gonna finish up the chapter now. My pen's almost written everything I've thought of to write."
I smiled and guided the pen in my hand once more to write in my own handwriting than it magically writing by my will.
I smiled and lt go of it, having it write the story on its own without my hand's guidance. It was working well, good, so no bugs with that spell. It was connected to my mind and what it wished to write so it knew exactly what it was doing. I faced the both of them by turning around as much as I could without having to get up and change my position. I may have been able to walk, but with crutches.
"Well the story is really cool. It's about this girl. She was born blind and well, she's always missed out on the fruits of being able to see in life. She's always been lonely. Her dad's a workaholic and never pays attention to her. She has no friends because she's always within her father's corporate doors. She does get to go out sometimes but rarely ever. She's always been picked on for being the rich kid in school, when she goes. For those who know about her impairment they tease her for that. One day she runs away from home. She swears she'll grow up to be the strongest and best warrior that ever lived, even without her sight. It's then that on one of her journeys she meets a young wizard. A boy with incredible power and no way to control it. He must learn to work together with her because in the end there is an evildoer plotting the destruction of the main character. Why? Because even though she's blind, the blood within her is a rare and special gift. Just the kind of gift that could be used in various demonic ways. The wizard and the girl must stop the evildoer at all costs. They end up becoming best friends along their journeys. However, in the end, they get into this big battle with this evildoer, she's charged with super power by the gems she wears all around her. They give her her incredible strength. The wizard and the girl take her on, and the boy ends up dying from the battle. It's a little too much for him to handle. But he's weakened her enough so that the girl takes matters into her own hands and slays the evildoer and sets free all of her test subjects that never had a chance at life. I'm wondering if I should have a twist at the end that makes it so the wizard boy comes back and cures her blindness, or leave it as is."
I explained my story to them.
"Haha! Wow, sounds like a sob story. Only you'd come up with that princey!"
She took another puff of her cigarette.
"So that's the whole plot huh? Well, I sure hope that there's something else in there you could make it a little more exciting. I mean, gee, all of that is way too cliche. The only part that caught my interest was the test subjects you said. What kind of test subjects we talkin' and what are they capable of?"
"That's because you're a science freak and that's the only thing that would interest you in this epic tale. I don't think it's all that boring. I think it's good for someone whom isn't a writer."
"Relax prince, you don't have to get all touchy about it. Man, you claim you're anything but female, feminine, and here you are getting all defensive. Quit your whining, I never said the story was bad. Just that it'd bore me some. This isn't my type of story y'know?"
"Well, I think I'm gonna finish up the chapter now. My pen's almost written everything I've thought of to write."
I smiled and guided the pen in my hand once more to write in my own handwriting than it magically writing by my will.
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I smiled at her story, "Sounds like a wonderful tale" I muttered. Blake was starting to get annoying and this made my face scrunch up. I sighed and leaned back, hoping to get away from hearing her remarks. "Utena, why is it that you attract all the mouthy ones?" I smirked. I knew I was mouthy but jeez Blake took the cake.
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